You're all pretty fucking good! Your sound is great, my only complaint is that your timing throughout felt slightly... off. Still a damn good track!
It could use a tad more variation, with melodies and drum patterns, but it sounds good! Keep it up!
thanks will do
Yup, that's a hip-hop beat. Hooray for clapping.
Your beat and melodies are pretty good, but it lacks any real hook. It needs some kind of vocals, or topping lead, to keep the listener's interest... (Yes, I'm aware of how hard lyrics and vocals are to do.)
Overall pretty good though! 5'd for good structure, melodies, and mastering.
Thanks for the review, and the tips!
I'm slowly getting there.. each song (in my opinion) gets increasingly better, so it's just a matter of getting to know my software better and becoming more familiar with the components of music in general :D
I'll keep the advice in mind for my tracks to come!
going to the bathroom must get awkward, huh?
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